A Tribute To My Readers

A Tribute To My Readers

A Poem by Saumya
"

A writer is incomplete without the readers, so this is a short tribute to you all....

"
My dear readers,
I'm grateful to you all,
for being here...

Each time i write a poem,
i earnestly wait,
wait for your reviews,
because, they tell me the depth,
to which my poems are true..!

I never thought,
that I'd write,
but there's a story
a story, behind it,
full of insight,
that makes one smile.
which I'd like
to share with y'all
tonight...

When I was a kid
of twelfth grade,
it was the day, i think,
third or fourth of May,
I remember the day,
I remember the date,
it was the Moral Science
class on 5th of May,
My teacher told us
to write something,
on the topic, `When I'll bid Adieu`
While others wrote
one or two lines,
I was there
with four lines..!
she checked everyone's writing,
by her keen mind,
and intense understanding..
And when she came to me,
and read those four lines,
the situation, i feel was truly divine!

I  know not
what she saw in
those lines,
she came to me,
and urged me,
to complete that poem
By May nine...
the next day, i did it,
and later,
it got published in our
first school magazine,
for the first time..!

Everyone who read,
appreciated it a lot,
and encouraged me
to continue this
great work of mine,
In the coming time.

but all that happened,
was because of Her
my lovely teacher
that time,
who fell in love
with those four lines!

yes, my dear readers,
I'd really love to tell,
that,
if i write well today,
its entire credit goes to her.!!

Then i came here,
and wrote more poems,
and the result i think,
y'all have in front of you!


My dear readers,
i really cherish your presence,
in reading and reviewing my writings,
and i cordially thank you, and wish,
that, in future, you will be even
more supporting.



if i am a poem, you are my words.!
if i am a book, you are the pages.!
So, i request you, to always be
with me,
in this race of chaste,
as a book is empty, without pages,
and a poem, useless, without
words and phrases..!!



    























 

© 2017 Saumya


Author's Note

Saumya
I hope, you will definitely like this....
if yes, then please do review and rate it..!!
thanks a lot for reading..!!

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this is lovely truly lovely
I love the way you gave credit to your teacher.
I also did a similar story last week a true story in credit to my 5th grade teacher how odd that we write the same thing
well done
read my story if you like re my 5th grade teacher its all true
love your work keep writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

6 Years Ago

*smiles* glad you do!💖
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

5 Years Ago

i just read your poem again and still love it 11 months later :) smiles
Saumya

5 Years Ago

So glad you read it again, dear Julie!💖 I indeed feel more honoured to have written it now😊read more



Reviews

How well this highlights the profound impact of teachers - and of others that give us encouragement and support our personal and skills development. I hope your teacher realizes how much it meant to you... and we can all remind ourselves of the importance of nurturing self-worth

Posted 5 Years Ago


I truly liked your sweet poem how you give credit to your teacher. Thank you for sharing .

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

5 Years Ago

Thanks so much Lilly :) Glad you liked the poem.
As for the credit, she indeed deserves it!
Thanks for sharing 😊😊😊.
Keep writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

5 Years Ago

Thanks for going through the poem, Rahull! :)
this is such a sweet poem. a lovely tribute to your teacher. the poem had a great flow and the message was truly charming

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

5 Years Ago

Thanks so much dear DM! 😊
I feel so glad that this poem(which I wrote and posted here some.. read more
Elizabeth

5 Years Ago

It was entirely my pleasure. Your poem was fantastic. :)
The stimulus that you gained from your teacher , or parents can be a guiding factor for the rest of your life. Encouragement can take two forms. Praise is pleasant , but even harsh criticism can be a driving force to make you prove that you can defeat it. As we grow older we gradually incorporate these lessons into our own personalities. That's when we learn to appreciate them.......and I'm still learning! :-)
. Norman

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There comes a time in all our lives
When we must take a look
At what we're leaving in our wake
And what it really took

to leave the world a better place
for having seen our tread.
And know that we've not left disgrace
or something else to dread.

Life must be a two-way sword.
submitting we are lost.
Ignore assumptions of the word.
With empathy the cost.

We only hope that we can match,
your teacher's lagacy

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

6 Years Ago

Thankyou so much for your thoughtful review, dear Norbanus😊 it is indeed a dull life, which doesn.. read more
Good tribute to a good teacher... long may you write!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Saumya

6 Years Ago

😊 Thankyou so much!
this is lovely truly lovely
I love the way you gave credit to your teacher.
I also did a similar story last week a true story in credit to my 5th grade teacher how odd that we write the same thing
well done
read my story if you like re my 5th grade teacher its all true
love your work keep writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

6 Years Ago

*smiles* glad you do!💖
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

5 Years Ago

i just read your poem again and still love it 11 months later :) smiles
Saumya

5 Years Ago

So glad you read it again, dear Julie!💖 I indeed feel more honoured to have written it now😊read more
Great and inspiring story. I can only hope that you will live on in another person's art. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Saumya

6 Years Ago

Thankyou so much :)
You have a gift in writing, I am really impressed by your writings and this one made me appreciate reading it. Thank you my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Saumya

6 Years Ago

Thankyou so much, Joey!😊
That means a lot to me.
Joey Nizz

6 Years Ago

You're welcome :) keep it up.

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