Feelings That Chime

There are many words, many feelings that can relate to one another, many people can relate their selves to the words a poet writes.

Feelings That Chime

Have you ever felt the pain,

like you have lost more than you gain,

like the heart you own is broken

because of the many words left unspoken

Have you ever felt alone,

in the crowd of all known

Like heart hurts to say a word,

broken heart made your vision blurred

Have you ever been so high,

like you are completely free to fly

Then all your dreams, they're shattered

because of all the things which once you flattered

Well, precious let not poor thoughts lead you down,

if you are happy, if your aren't, be like a clown

Cover your pain with a smile and laughter

let your foe think, your life is happily ever after

Beloved friend, it's nothing, but a matter of time

Giving up on yourself is a big crime

Many wounds are healed by time

With your feelings, these words would chime

Author's Note

Thanks A lot for stopping by, hope you'll enjoy! :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your logic.
"Beloved friend, it's nothing, but a matter of time
Giving up on yourself is a big crime
Many wounds are healed by time
With your feelings, these words would chime"
Old wisdom. Failure, just lessons for us to not repeat the same mistakes. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yeah! And Thank You very very much for your kind review! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Irenic]

A very very very nice poem. the way you relate everything to another is

[Archos]

Thank you for brightening my day :)

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

I loved everything in the poem from the title to the last line. You've portrayed the reality of life excellently. Really, really well done! :)

Beloved friend, it's nothing, but a matter of time
Giving up on yourself is a big crime
Many wounds are healed by time
With your feelings, these words would chime

These are such great lines giving off a powerful aura of positivity. A superb conclusion to an equally superb poem. Keep up the good work! :)

[alf]

Oh yes I did enjoy!!! Hi Dreamer. Sorry this has taken so long, but I have just returned to site. You have written this with great expression!!! I can feel the caring, the friendly hand you extend, and I just loved the read!!! Please send me more to read!!! alf

[Mayank]

'feel good' write. I enjoyed.

[Ana B.]

A very beautiful and enchanting piece.....a bit dipped in sadness but always calling to the strong side one has....

[B]

I love your work
Your words scream emotions and is very clear

And you have such intensity in all your writes

You capture a moment so well

[Pratik Mishra]

WoW! Just, wow!..............

[Mitali Shah]

Absolutely agree Dreamer. Time makes you heal every wound if you decide to initiate your step first. Good one

[AaronFreitas]

"Have you ever felt alone,
in the crowd of all known
Like heart hurts to say a word,
broken heart made your vision blurred"

I must say I have dreamer... sometimes thats exactly what my darker, sad pieces are about. Beautiful write :)