Ask Your Heart

"We often live the way others wants us to live. We give up our dreams but just for once stop listening to others opinions and ASK YOUR HEART!"

Ask Your Heart

Life lived many years,

with so many rare fears

Fear of other's thoughts,

worked on their shoulds and their Oughts

Killed our opinions one by one,

let go of our dreams, like we had none

Listened to what others say,

noted every single of their phrase

Changed our lives, changed our dreams

That's how you think you can shut their screams

More so, changed the way you look,

with their every word, your head, you shook

Often hurt deeply by what they say

But still you work their way

Live not in the world so dark

Brighten up your colours and let them spark

Live you life, live it your way,

ask your Heart what it really say

Give up not, on yourself and your dreams

Doesn't matter how hard it may seems

Listen to your heart, listen to what it says

Let not you dreams just fade in the haze

Show the world your burning spark,

live your life to full, do leave your marks 

Author's Note

Hope You guys will like it, THANKS FOR VISITING! :)

Reviews

[Maan]

Its never possible to satisfy others, the lacking and hollowness which they have inside them never let them shut up.
Its not possible either to discard them out of your life. You gotta learn a way to keep listening them without letting it hurt you or your dreams.
:) Its a good poem, almost every human can relate to it.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yup you're RIGHT! ... And THANK YOU so much for your kind word, thankyou so mUch!

[AaronFreitas]

Awww I'm glad to see your writing :) I always love your words, your thoughts and your creativity. Another awesome piece Dreamer :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Aww Thanks a lot... Your review means so much to me! I am so lucky that you like my stuff!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

hell yeah........
show them all..........the fire in your heart.......and let the heat burn them good......
awesome message........
very well rhymed.....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Aww THANK You a million times! Thanks A lot :) Glad you loved it :)

[sereenaoutloud]

So true we are all influenced by those around us..sometimes not listening to ourselves and hesitating!
Great write! :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Absolutely! Yeah but we should stop for a minute listening to others, we are all very unique. Be yourself and rule the world!

[sereenaoutloud]

Be yourself and Rule the world! Love that girlie...well said!! :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Hehe THANKS! :* :* :*

[sinNsincerity]

Whether we want to admit it or not, we are shaped by peoples opinions. Their thinking, good or bad, makes us reflect on ourselves and influences our decisions.
I wrote in one of my poems, " I get all my character traits from all of you."
Great write Dreamer!

[Destiny Dreamer]

So TRUE! ... Thank YOU so much! :)

[B]

Look within
Leave all that is without

I love your way with words
I read your poems
suddenly all noise fades away

All i hear is your words
High five ......

[Destiny Dreamer]

Awww that's really ENCOURAGING my dear friend, THANK YOU SO MUCH, that you are taking your time out to read my poem :)

[Willard Wells]

Brought to mind the Frank Sinatra song "My Way". We have to travel and follow our own path decided by us as individuals to be truly happy. Nice writing

[Destiny Dreamer]

Exactly, thats the point. But alas! nowadays everyone is running after the opinions of others. Even they can't decide to be themselves, they change themselves for others, but believe me they'll never get true heart satisfaction!

[Willard Wells]

It's the "ME" generation and narcissism is king.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well hi :) long time no see. I missed your read requests. :) well, i love this poem. :) and totally agree with the message. :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Hello :) Yup, so sorry I got very busy in life :/ Thank YOU so much. You review means A lot to me :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Its ok :) and no problem :)

[ANTO]

It a wonderful poem Dreamer. It has all the optimism of youth but is nonetheless relevant to all.
Great rhyming. Thanks for sharing this.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thank YOU so much ANTO! :)