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The inability of a person getting educated. Some don't feel any value of it and others can't have the value.

Pen and paper,
Mind a tool,
Destiny a scrapper,
Now money a tool.

Dreams of many,
But opportunities taper,
Fists devoid of penny,
But still want pen and paper.

Author's Note

Enjoy your choice, everybody doesn't have it. :')

Reviews

[Kevin Andros]

Wow! It surprised me. It is a very powerful piece. I am amazed at the depth you got to achieve with so little words and such a small work of art. It goes to show and prove the age old saying, "Less is more." It shows that you don't have to write huge passages to take your point across. Each word is chosen very carefully, each carrying weight and meaning in your entire piece. I like the consistency you had from the start to the end of this.

And love that like all of your works it is really open to the readers' interpretation. It is not confined to one conclusion. I love these kinds of open ended works.

This piece is very deep and is in contrast of your young age. This piece looks like a work of a person who has gotten more experience of this bitter life.

Keep writing and growing.

Best,
~KA~

[Fieora Andros]

Thankyou a lot for praising me so much.
I have no words to explain how nice i feel after reading your review. :')

[Ayesha]

Absolutely. And also the education that we witness today has become so monopolized that it deliberately margins out those who are unable to contribute to the business.
You have struck the right note. I am enjoying your work and its simplicity. Hope to read you more.🤍

[Fieora Andros]

Absolutely! Education is one type of business now.
And yeah, sure. Thanks for reviewing. :')

[Lea Sheryn]

The desire to put pen to paper is a writer's life.

[Fieora Andros]

Very true :')

[Lea Sheryn]

Thank you :-))