I’m Movin (From left to Right side)

This song is about how I feel about my life and how I am living it!

I’m Movin (From left to Right side)

1.      Focusing only one point

Never think what is around

Always be good boy

Always the perfect boy

Every time I try to be brave

That’s what make me weak

That was the time when I give

Power to some one else

 

2.      Trusting my friends and my parents

Mostly it was a lie

Should listen into myself

Follow what heart dessire

I am not enough strong

To let my story run it’s course

That was a time when my

Happy story ended

 

Refrain:        I’m not a lyer, I’m not a lyer

                     I’m moveing from left to right side

                     From left to right side

                     I am hiding, I am hiding

                     I’m moveing from left to right side

 From left to right side

Author's Note

Please ignore grammar problems! Please tell me what do you think about my poetry after reading?!

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Love the depth and rhythm of your song, and the glimpse into the fragments of life that both reveal the truth and hide it as well.

[Ebrights]

Do you think I need to continue writting poems and show them to every one? Know it still want help me make myself feel good or ...

[An owl on the moon]

If your soul tells you to write, then never stop, no matter what anyone else says. Your voice, your life, it will rise best where you are meant to be. And I can only hope that means you'll keep writing. :)

[Ebrights]

I like to do that but sometime when I think about it I feel so bad and lost! I even dont know if it is for me! But from other side I want to do that!

[An owl on the moon]

Well, may you always feel support here to be you, in every side of you that there is!