Rose Buds and Burning Plains

Rose Buds and Burning Plains

A Poem by Sunshadow Coyote

Red and crimson.
Touching and breathing.
Everything covered in sweet dew.

Lovely and poisonous.
Pounding and stress.
Message not received.

Crashing and burning.
Spark and light
Smoke fills your soul.

© 2012 Sunshadow Coyote


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I like how short it is. When readers see a shorter length, I feel like they realize that they have to pay attention more or risk missing a detail. It also invites readers to reread the poem multiple times...which I did.
As for your meaning, well it's definitely unique. I can't really put it into words but I liked it. I can tell this was out of your comfort zone, and factoring that in, it came out very nice.
This one will make them think...depending on their perspective of course..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunshadow Coyote

8 Years Ago

perspective indeed



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I like how short it is. When readers see a shorter length, I feel like they realize that they have to pay attention more or risk missing a detail. It also invites readers to reread the poem multiple times...which I did.
As for your meaning, well it's definitely unique. I can't really put it into words but I liked it. I can tell this was out of your comfort zone, and factoring that in, it came out very nice.
This one will make them think...depending on their perspective of course..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunshadow Coyote

8 Years Ago

perspective indeed

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Sunshadow Coyote
Sunshadow Coyote

northbridge, MA



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I enjoy the small things. If you can perceive life at my level (few can) then well be good friends. Perspective is everything. more..

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