Haunted Dreams

Just broken

You made it look so easy.. Just walk away, to extinguish me from your life completely.. You deceived me, you made me believe you loved me.. Now youre gone, yet, even in my dreams, you continue to betray me.. You've infiltrated my last safe refuge.. You were once the lover in my dreams, kind & gentle.. Now, those dreams where I found solace, have been hijacked by a tyrant.. My lover has morphed into the monster under my bed.. My knight in shining armor has tranformed into the fire breathing dragon.. How dare you? You left my life, now get the hell out of my dreams!!

Reviews

[Rahul]

Lol...:) this write is lovely from starting but in middle it;s haunted and at last it;s been funny when he became monster from a guy and you said "get the hell outta here"...lolo
this's really a nice one and hey, you should have to write one story on it...believe me it'd be really damn nice to read...i'd even love to read youse story if you write.
keep writing :)

[Shaunna Harper]

Oooh I like! Very good contrast between the good and the bad, the soft and the hard etc. makes for a good reading. Love the line: "You've infiltrated my last safe refuge." Well done.

[Malan]

Thank you so much :)

[Sami Khalil]

" My lover has morphed into the monster under my bed.. My knight in shining armor has tranformed into the fire breathing dragon.. How dare you? You left my life, now get the hell out of my dreams!!"
The power of brokenness is displayed here marvelously...:)

[Malan]

Thank you so much.. I wrote this several months ago, not a single feeling has changed, apparently, I'm slow to heal, lol..

[Sami Khalil]

I understand ...You are welcome...:)