Waiting....

Waiting....

A Poem by The Flame of the Knight

Im just sitting here,

Waiting for you to reply.

I dont know whats happening,

But i want to know if your ok.

I am sitting here waiting,

For your return.

My heart aches for you,

And I hope you are near.

My soul is cold,

While i wait.

© 2012 The Flame of the Knight


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This is so simple, yet so lovely. Wonderful job, especially for such a short piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think its really good writing. But yeah they shouldn't keep you waiting like that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


why don't you tell her to actually keep a conversation with you. You know that if she doesn't converse that it could be bad for your relationship.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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The Flame of the Knight
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