Eccedentesiast Perfection

Mwahahahaha a made a poem when i was bored so i hope it doesn't come out horrible

This is the story of a girl who was thought as perfect,
She hadhurt for so long she thought it was worth it.

But in the end it almost ruined her life,

and made her fear the reapers scythe.


Do you really think you know the real me ?
Because I have no idea who I could be
I hide behind that stupid flawless mask
Just Hoping one day it will actually last

Yeah look inside what people call my "pretty eyes"
Stare real hard try to guess my lies
Can you see my broken heart?
Or just my mask offlawless art?

Did you know I cried myself to sleep last night?
But why must I alone have this fight?
I'm sick and tired of being alone
Please let me stay i don't want to go home.

I see your effort as you start to try
But no one can help I'm bound to die
Could you guess that I would feel lost?
I'm considered perfect,But thats the cost.

-SilentlyBeautiful.

Author's Note

Okay this is a poem about a part in my life which was very hard excpet now it seems like the easiest again plse do not judge but I swear mypoems get better

Reviews

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

Again, there is the mask we all wear!
"I'm considered perfect,But thats the cost."

Seriously you make a great point....at what cost does someone have to endure when it comes to beauty! I see beautiful people around & think, they should never feel the pain of being alone because look how beautiful they are....it's what society has expected! But then I see the more unperfect soul who you realize must always feel that loneliness because seriously who looks at them twice!

Morally if you think about it no matter the mask we all experience that feeling on loneliness & wanting to fit in no matter the cost!

Excellent write here! You make so many impacting good points! You have such a wondrous talent, never give that up & continue to take whatever gives you that push to write....embrace it whole-heartedly!

[Dark Dancer (Grass Seed..]

! love your poem!!
Its amazing!!
Your an amazing writer!!

[paradise]

Thank yous

[Bridgette's Ink]

I think your poems are great!! im actually trying to learn from them because i love the way you write. very emotional.

[paradise]

Thank you you understand my poems so well