Lullaby Wonders

just a poem of atragic love story

I sit on thy room
I pull out the thread
I get out a needle
I wish to be dead

The needle goes through thy skin
F**k theres pain all over my lips
oh the sweet agony tht comes from a pin
I'm crying silently as thy blood drips

I put down the needle
I put down the thread
My lips are stitched
So close to dead

The blood it'sall over thy shirt
Romeo Romeo Where art tho Romeo
Where were you when i felt this hurt
I always wished you would be thy hero

I stare at the needle
I look at the thread
Remember what happened
It's in thy head

But when i needed you thy most
You were too busy making a toast
Now because of you this poison I shall swallow
You are thy reasdon i felt so hallow

You smile at thy needle
You grin at thy thread
You see my stitched lips
And realize I'm Dead

You now know what you did
Thy guilt of knowing your the reason I died
You pull out a knife thus was forbid
You stab your heart with one final cry
For you thy reason I had to die

Author's Note

Hope you like it please comment and tell me what you think

Reviews

[paradise]

Thank you it was what I was I was hoping to accomplish

[light and ashes]

The games that people play in "love" and relationships are most often so hurtful and make victims. The action of this woman stitching up her lips means she completely giving up. She isn't fighting anymore. The passion in her and her life has died forever. She will not ever laugh or speak up for herself, for anyone or for anything for that matter. She is dead although she still breathes. Romeo takes his own life because now he realizes how cruel his games are, or maybe she wishes that he would take his own life or that maybe she thinks that he would if he truely knew. This is a lovely and magnificent poem.

[Quentin Moyer]

Wow! I really like this!!!

[paradise]

Thank you again It is appreiciated I try to write everything the best I can with emotion I hope it works

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

WOW completely intense.....I can take this in so many forms! Stitching the lips comes from the Silence of the pain that was endured! The thread of life which has been cut to the soul! This piece is dark & I love that part! Raw feelings poured through the eye of the needle! Great write my friend! You have such deep dark talent! I'm intrigued immensely!

[paradise]

Thank you it means alot :D And that's how I hoped it would turn out.

[Kayla K]

I really liked it. It was mystifying with a dark twist.