Broken Dreamer

Broken Dreamer

A Poem by paradise
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For A Friend

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Broken Dreamer

Wake From Your Sleep

Love Hurts

But You I will always keep.

 

Crystal Keys

With Broken pleas

My Supernova Saviour

Mends Broken Dreams

 

Moonlight Dancer,

Twirls with Grace.

Butterfly Beauty,

Forgotten Trace.

 

Footprints Stain,

The Hearts in Stone.

Kings And Queens,

Sit on thier Throne.

 

Sunshine Dreamer,

Wishes on Stars.

Hurts Everyday,

Scars on her Arms

 

Magic Balloon,

Fly Sky High.

She's Forever Hurting,

My Broken Butterfly.

 

Delicate Wings,

Fragile like Glass.

Were Torn apart,

Will Never Last.

 

Her Love Story,

Dies Everytime.

Feared Insanity,

And Tearful Cries

 

Tree Giants,

Shocked Surprise.

Oceans Waves,

Cover Lies.

 

Ribboned Beauty,

Fell Asleep.

Enchanted Wishes,

In Too Deep.

 

 

 

© 2011 paradise


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It flows almost like a lullaby. Wonderfully penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing! Truly enjoyed this heartfelt emotional piece. Great write! It's beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you angelink it means alot every word I wrote was emotion and the things I love expressed in emotion the smallest things facsinate me and this was a poem tht i did my best to represent how I feel and what I enjoy and love. Thank you
all for being kind and reviweing my poems. I hope you all know I aprreciate and love to hear it. Every thing I write is apart of me please dont judge

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a damaged spirit who refuses to let their dreams and wistful nature be crushed. This a lovely poem. I love it. This is so much better than just ok.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh thanks babe I will never forget it but you are still amazing in every way and dont u dare forgettht

Posted 12 Years Ago


Absolutely breath-taking SilentlyBeautiful!!! I feel every stroke of your words! The meanings behind every feeling! Brings tears to my eyes for you allowed me to journey with you through your words!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You write so beautifully. Going in favorites.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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