Anxiety Scare

When was the last time you felt afraid

when was the last time someone actually came to your aid?

when was the time your smile has a glow?

not tht fake s**t I know its all show.

 

Author's Note

I wrote this couldn't finish it any thoughts

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

The piece poses a good question I think many people ask. I think the only answer is to ask the self a question in return, How does one glow? In such a way that they themselves know, it's not a show.

Thinking ink.
Aaron

[idk]

I like this. It's always a good thing when a writer can get there message across in such a short poem. Good job :)

[Inyourshadow]

Have you ever seen me really seen me
or have you always looked away
choosing to cover my screams with laughter
from painted smile and shaded eyes
wearing blinkers to all that ails me
let me go not that you would notice me gone
for you left me long ago

hope it helps. Love what you began, keep it v
coming

[LoveYourself]

I like this poem. I can really relate to it. The easy flow of the words, even the shortness of the poem..I like short poems. They have a lot of meaning in just a few simple words. I like the meaning behind the write..it speaks volumes.
~Missy OwO~