Far Away Dreamer

Please help me I need soem assistance

A far away dreamer

comes here to the field

inquisitive behaviour

circles the dandilion wishes

She sits and stares

at the tree before her eyes

 

She looks at the moon

the stars

there exquisite beauty

and how they baffle her

The way the stars shine

Of how it takes her breathe away

the way the radiat and glow

its like they came just to see her

knowing she would watch there show

 

Without them she is lost

they guide her the right

way leading her forward

never letting her stray

 

Far away dreamer

why is it you ask

why do you wonder

never stay at a place

are you looking for a world

where none will hear you scream

see your pain or

know your game?

 

Where did all your madness go

down real far

right and forgotten into the gallows

we always go

She escaped because she took a chance

played with a chain

because it was a choice

he ever thought she would lose everything

It took away her voice

she doesn'ty fight just runs

leaves behind ever painful glance 

one by one

She is too broken for any boy to have

they never brought her joy

there i LOve yous were bland

 

It was too hard

 so she left

 walked out 

 let them stare

let them wonder 

choosing to just

go anywhere

but here

 

as she sits under a tree

watching falling leaves

looking to the stars

and wishing on dreams

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

This is my favorite of yours thus far
Great imagery and flow brilliant poem

100/100

[Drew]

Mystical is a word i would use if i had to describe this to a person who had never read it

[Hoosier Belle]

This is wonderful, love the imagery

[The Girl with the smile]

Great poem! I love the last verse. Beautiful imagery!

[johnnyqueer]

This is kind of enchanting, and very beautiful. I liked this a lot!