Colorless Capture

I'm taking a chance

it's time for me

to start coloring outside the lines

and stop following the signs

 

Passing  the Boulevard

Of Broken Dreams

I take a right

down Carnage lane

 

But it's not me

I'm not this girl

hear me now

she's no where to be

found

she begging and asked

for you to remeber me

but that was not enough

she had to leave

 

Trusted Disapperence

where can you be

I'm walking down a road

as lonely as could be

 

Staring down

at the cliffs

of insanity

I let courage and

 bravery slowly

leave me

 

Sweet Serenity

take control over me

let me take a minute

and teach me how to breathe

 

Look down to the seas

crashing waves are bound

where hear at the cliffs of insanity

I lay just waiting to be found

 

Waiting for the moment

the moment that will take

me to a place better than this

I'm waiting to go to where

the moon lies

and just beside it

shooting stars light

 

 

With Ruby red lips

in a reflection

of a broken mirror

Theres a girl

waiting to be awoken

not to be kept in the dark

but theres too many problems

that linger to long

leaving to many

traces

of a life once lived

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Love colouring outside the lines reminds one of childhood innocense when we did what we pleased refusing to conform to the strict rules and outlined directions we were being given now if only in adulthood we could again attain both that innocense and bold arrogance disregarding others veiws of us and being truly free to be ourselves. Multi layered piece I loved it, keep em' coming

ps that a real tattoo if so what's it represent in your life freedom or need to escape

[Mockingbird]

expresses despair and one who is lost. one who wants people to know she exists. we've all been down this lonely road at one time or another, she's not the only one. she will make it through by her own strength and bravery. excellent poem.

[Aka.Hipster]

I've read this a few times. It's one of my favorite poems truly a work of art. I absolutely adore this pierce. Your write so well

[johnnyqueer]

I like this. I agree with the below comment, the flow is really good. Nice write.

[paparapapa]

The flow is brilliant! I held my breath for a few seconds there. haha. Awesome stuff you have here. Good job. ;)

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i liked it dude...