A Chance for Love

A Chance for Love

A Poem by Forevermore

I find myself trying to get closer to you

It turns me on when I think about what we could do

I don't play games and I think it's time you see some proof

so let me put this in your head and give you time to see it through

 

If I never had the chance, I never would've loved

If the time wasn't right I would've been left from your side, these other girls text me but I don't think I should reply

Late nights, on the phone with you

when I used to be on the phone with who?

Same thing different girl but I'm smarter not to choose, and now she got her head down

Catching feelings like the flu

I don't regret how I treat them

i just leave them with the blues

© 2012 Forevermore


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AK
Very nice poem! I liked it a lot. Simple language but very powerful. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


The second line, your I needs to be capitalized. I like the concept you were driving for and the second line is the most powerful. I think you should go more in depth and add to it though. Over all great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 18, 2012
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