When Dad Was A Bear

When Dad Was A Bear

A Poem by FractalLuna

When Dad was a bear,

He would roar in my ear.

When Dad was a bear,

His intentions were unclear.

When Dad was a bear,

His size was immense.

When Dad was a bear,

His words made no sense.

His teeth were sharp,

His eyes deeply glazed,

His consumption rate left me amazed.

Deep in the woods of my childhood,

His claws sliced me where I stood,

A forlorn Goldilocks where nothing's “just right,”
Where he growled with all of his might,

In and out of the den,

When Dad was a bear.  


-FractalLuna-

© 2016 FractalLuna


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Gee
Loved this, makes me wonder what my daughter would write about me. I dread to think

Posted 7 Years Ago


FractalLuna

7 Years Ago

I wonder now, too!
This Poem made me Smile. Loved the Way you Metaphored Dad with a Bear. Was a Funny Read, all along. Hope not, Your Dad is on WC too, He would Growl reading this. Lol.

Posted 7 Years Ago


FractalLuna

7 Years Ago

Haha He would growl at this! If he does, he does. Nothing I'm not used to. I am glad you enjoyed .. read more

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