DeadLy DReam

DeadLy DReam

A Poem by Fran Marie

`` Deadly Dream``
 

In slumber came a dream so real 
A midnight fog, most dead I feel
Depths of hell bode, a dream so real
My soul to steal, My soul to steal

Dark Shadows deep, within my dream
Entombed my mind, so it would seem
Could not escape this deadly scene
I tried to scream! I could not scream!

I sought relief, but could not rest
My spirit sealed,My soul possessed
Retrieve my peace!, I do protest!
I did my best, I did my best.

Deep, Deeper, Down! My spirit bent
in dark despair, of Hell's descent
Inferno's pit, of no repent
'Twas no relent, 'Twas no relent!



 

© 2008 Fran Marie


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'Fran Marie,
'Deadly Dream'
Even within our night visions we are experiencing life essence.
'In slumber came a dream so real
a midnight fog, so dead I feel'
Who knows what is really happening? Is God speaking to us?
Are we connected to others? I am fascinated by this kind of thing.
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

A h ha ..I see you have found this old relic ..I almost forgot I wrote this one..I thank you dear K.. read more
Kathy Van Kurin

4 Months Ago

Keep having fun with your writing and thank you
The rhythm and rhyme sound great! Excellent poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I really like this...I like your style and it flows beautifully with your excellent rhymes. Very good

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love your technique! So effective. This is a beautiful peom and the elegant font suits it well. I really enjoyed this one.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Definately felt Poe'ish...very dark, very excellent...just one question (because my tech knowledge of poety is limited) the fourth line repeats in each stanza except for I tried to scream, I could not scream...what was your reason for the choice here?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very nicely dark and chilling!

Posted 10 Years Ago


GREAT POEM!!!!!!! amazing poem gave me chills and gave my inspiration...i once had a nightmare that i went to hell..it was awful..hope dosent happen to me..lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem, it flows perfectly and I really enjoyed it a lot, thanks for your submission, this is beautiful and I really enjoyed it. Thanks

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this is very beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a haunting dream.

I sought relief, but could not rest
My spirit sealed,My soul possessed
Retrieve my peace!, I do protest!
I did my best, I did my best.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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