^BLOOD^

 

He walks by night and sleeps by day
A nightly curse he does portray
with trails of blood for his display
Are you his prey? His deadly prey!

 

His spell is cast,'neath midnight's moon
Beware! he comes, so very soon
to drink your blood from mortal's wound
'neath midnight's moon, immortal's moon

 

A demon dark,he's straight from hell
to control you with ghastly spells
just when he comes, you cannot tell
he does it well, so very well

 

This Vampire~will steal your soul
in nightmare dreams, he takes control
with no remorse, his mission bold
Beware! your soul, he'll steal your soul

 

His midnight flight,hovers above
stalking your veins,for wanton blood
with blood-red lips, he drains a flood
from sweet warm blood, he Vants your ^BLOOD^

 

Reviews

[Chiquita]

I like this. I am a vampire of sorts. I don't stalk about in the night and steal souls. I do take blood though. I am a nurse and phlebotomy is just one of the yucky things that I love about my job. :)

I am reading a lot about vampires right now. I do not know if it is because of the time of year or if this is just a common theme on the cafe. I do like this piece though. "stalking your veins,for wanton blood", I think this is my favorite line. I intend to write a piece about vampires or a vampire at some point.

I write in many genres. I do have one horror piece out there that you may be interested in checking out. REDEMPTION DRAWETH NIGH If you check it out, comment on it and let me know what you think.

[Death Girl]

I LOVE IT. I am totaly in love with this poem.

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your descriptive phrase is great and the rhyme is tight..so really liked reading this

[Texas]

Love it! So much better than mine. I love it!

[ShadowHaze]

oooooooomg!! I loved it!! The whole poem.... wonderful, and had you on the edge of your seat... Well, at least it did to me, lol.... I love it! Thanks for sharing it with us!!

[Servant Ties]

Amazing.....I loved it to pieces...

[Lady Of Darkness]

Great rhythm and flow.
Loved the use of words in this piece.
overall a great read.

[Candle in the wind]

I remember the chill in my spine when I was first told the story of dracula with graphic descriptions.It seemed so cold and lurking behind my shoulders.One can almost see a trail of blood.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, this is an awesome poem. I love how you wrote this. Awesome job!!!

Heather

[musegirlsm]

Great expressive poem! This is a bit chilling which is good, but you do fun it up in the end! I normally like my Vampires to be a misunderstood race that feed off of each other and not humans, but I do love the evil ones too, (also doomed and misunderstood).

I love this kind of subject matter. You are a very versatile writer, both in style and content. Good for you!

Great write!

sandra

[Dawnkain]

Creepy cool!!