`Words of Love`

~Words Of Love~(Sonnet)

 

Love you are to me, drops of honeywine
With each new kiss beneath the golden sun
Your lips sweet bouquet, quench this thirst of mine
Our love has entwined, for all time as one.

Valentine,we shall sing loves sweetest tune
Share eternal bliss, 'neath a silver moon
Of Cupid's Cup, we'll drink a toast to love
Kindly condoned by the heavens above

Let's reach for the highest star in the sky
These words of love, are meant for only you
The sun, moon and stars, know this to be true
Forever, we'll cherish love, you and I

You are to me sweet Love, my heart's delight
These Words of Love I'll pledge, each day, each night.

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Great mythic imagery for Valentine's Day: "drops of honeywine" in "Cupid's Cup." This is a wonderful answer to the Valentine's Day Challenge -- and you didn't even have to wrack your brain for something new! :D

This one hales back to Victorian romantic poetry for me. Love it. How did I miss it before?

NOTES: you need spaces behind several of your commas

[Fran Marie]

Most definitely an oldie from years ago, thanks so much for reviewing and the notes..

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Brett Campaigne]

a great Halmark moment

[James Watts]

This was a nice piece. Romantic, sentimental and it had a very nice flow. Good work

[V. K. Harris]

Wow just swept me off my feet, Beautifully writen.

[Emily B]

Sweet, delightful, and romantic. Great write!

[Autumn Dawn Gorny]

very nicely done

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Romantic. Great love poem.

[Amor-de-angel]

Beautiful,sweet and full to the brim with love

[Tii-Nez]

I'm puddy....

How romantic... a love ballad...a love vow.

[Greg the Bard]

Worthy of Hallmark! I love the way you attach each line. The rhyme is wonderful. The readers attention is grabbed at first and the flow tends to keep it. Great job

[Gandré]

This really was soo sweet that I taste it on my tongue. What a feast for senses!
share eternal bliss,'neath a silver moon
of cupid's cup, we'll drink a toast to love---------my favorite!