Color me

 

 

Color me a rainbow
  sprinkled with golden dreams
             with dashes of wishes
                       in  purples, blues and green

Color a me a heaven
  with cotton-candy-clouds
            amid a sky of azure blue
                   Color me sweet red roses
                         kissed by  fresh morning dew

Color me some raindrops
   Splashes of misty-crystal hue
           with wet blades of silky green grass
                                     to run barefoot thru~

Color me lofty trees
     dressed in autumn's shades of gold
                 Clusters of scarlet and brown ones
                         on the ground, as the seasons unfold

Color me a white-winter-wonderland
      with whistling wind and whirling snowflakes
             flying around in the crisp- cool air
               Then color me right into a verdant green spring
                                    where robins sing without a care

Color me back to summer
     Beneath a yellow-lemon '(sun')'
           Then color me a silver moon 
                 and black starlight night
                                when the day is done 
 

Reviews

[Cor]

I love this!! So much!

It flowed so well, I loved the structure and the colors.
Pictures beautifully painted into my mind. I forgot I was even reading and just got lost in imagination.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Cor.,so very much ,

[SmittyJas]

Love this the way you have used your typing and made the letters stand up is brilliant outstanding and smart.the colored letters were even better yet. I like very thing to do with this creation of this poem you Imagination is running full tilt on this challenge. Best of luck may you win God Bless.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Smitty, much appreciated;

[Eric Pudalov]

Beautifully colorful poem!! Congratulations on winning the "Colorful poetry" contest. I especially like the "Color me some raindrops" verse, but I love them all. You had all these images appearing in my head as I read it. Very nice job.

[Skai]

This is a nice poem it's cute. I think it was great for a rainbow contest. :)

[A]

Definitely brought a smile to my face. Love the feel of this piece and the overall message. Once again...CONGRATULATIONS! :)

[Beatrice Boyle (Grandm..]

Congratulations Fran on Winning first place...this was awesome!

Bea

[Kallima]

Very nice... I am reminded of childhood innocence and twight hours before Mother's call to come home.. great imagery!! Thanks for sharing.

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What a lovely write! Beautiful in content, imagery, formatting and flow. Thank you for sharing

[Justin Tobey]

Excellent poem. Very vivid descriptions, and I like the idea you had. I have a real affinity for color, so this piece appealed to me.

You should consider entering it in a contest I'm doing, called Colors. Thanks for sharing! :)