Dancing Waters

 

dancing waters flow

    in deep whirling waves, sea winds

                       blow mist clouded tears

 

 

my way, as I see

   your shadow stepping nearer

              I cast liquid life

 

 

lines unto your feet

  enlightening your mind,soul

                   and heart, take the gift

 

 

of dancing waters~

           its electrifying charm 

                                I now offer you.

 

 

    

         

      

 

 

                      

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fran.. your Art is blended with your poetry...
A Goddess of stormy waves where Souls collide...
The ebb and flow of of emotion against the
power of persuation when dancing and romancing...
Haiku's musical dance of Mermaid's Muse...
tenderly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Haiku' s musical dance..like
the thought of that..thank you Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You word flow like passion through a romantic heart... what a beautiful write.

[Jenny Nelson]

Beautiful! Your description is awesome, truly.

[Augustus]

The poem is as mesmerizing as the picture accompanying it ... "I cast liquid life lines" was the line of the poem for me. Fantastic alliteration... The tone is also noble, like a goddess bestowing her blessing upon mortals...Brilliantly rendered....

[Max]

I thought this poem had great imagry! and the picture suits it well!

[Epiphany]

You have a style I enjoy and find myself using in my pieces - minimalistic but very descriptive and the love and understanding of nature shines through! Awesome!

Sending prosperous smiles to share ;-)

[vandana]

nice poem and i like the flow & rhythm.

[Jola]

Nice poem. I like this photo ;)

[A]

Love the picture. It fits the poem perfectly. The poem is written very well! :)