A Darker Love

A Darker Love

A Poem by Fran Marie
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Gothic Love

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A darker love such as I've never known

  'tis the deepest part of me you own

you drink me in with gothic eyes

  into a midnight magic I can't deny

 

 

I cling to your every caress

   my darkest love you now possess

to darker realms of love that wait

   I'll walk with you thru~ hell's evil gate

 

 

Man nor beast shall come between

  this dark burning passion the world so deemed

A love with strength such as this

  secures the bond tighter with each dark kiss

 

 

A darker love is what you found in me

   and by the gods of hell you'll not go free

your chains are bound, I have the key

   yes, a darker love I've found in thee

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Fran Marie


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ilike the dark tone of this piece... a very chilling write.... liked the imagery in this alot overall nice job on this.... fav lines...Man nor beast shall come between

this dark burning passion the world so deemed

A love with strength such as this..... nice work!!!

secures the bond tighter with each dark kiss


Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Lovely

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow this is beautifull.. darker love is always a more interesting one. very creative :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fran this was supburb as only you can do it.. Dark,, deep, sensual, and ohhh so thrilling to the mind. Everytime You enter one in I know I am in for a treat of the senses.. You have such a devilish way with your words and take them a step furthur down the path towards gothic realm...

Loved it!!!

Mag xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very dark and gothic love!
i love the imagry and feel of how passionate their love is for one another!
really enjoyable read here!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


" cling to your every caress
my darkest love you now possess
to darker realms of love that wait
I'll walk with you thru~ hell's evil gate"

such a wonderful poem!
I loved that part.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ilike the dark tone of this piece... a very chilling write.... liked the imagery in this alot overall nice job on this.... fav lines...Man nor beast shall come between

this dark burning passion the world so deemed

A love with strength such as this..... nice work!!!

secures the bond tighter with each dark kiss


Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Love this. Written so well. Romantic and dark.

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

you drink me in with gothic eyes
into a midnight magic I can't deny

talk bout dark magic and undeniable love....
fabulous my friend, deeply intense and sensual.

Posted 14 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Very romantic and intense.
I love the dark passionate image this creates
in my mind of the couple.

Excellent! Love this alot!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

When I hear the term 'Dark Poetry" I immediately think Goth...so in my mind, this is right on!

It is intense, and has a gripping message of dark love.

Each verse is memorable, but the first one seems to set the stage of dark, midnight love!

Very nice!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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