Each Lovely Challenger Falls

Each Lovely Challenger Falls

A Poem by Freder Fredersen (aka Grady)
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gurglebots ride cashcows to glorious balderdash!

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when all the pretty elf twits are shining

then all the witty villains come dining

sparkling gore splatters fine hardwood floors

sending all their mommies sniffling and pining

 

 

faerie herds prance with a shimmering hustle

and spit fancy phrases like jackanape clods

on asphalt and diamonds, they giggle and bustle

with floppy slack jaws in ignorant fogs

 

 

in roll the predators; sexy smiling beasts

licking their lips in deep necrotic bliss

dressed up as bankers and lawyers and priests

delivering deathblows; cold Judas kiss

 

 

cunning words mope like a corpulent lummox

and strike (flash!) like a dexterous asp

jettisoned up from hot bubbling stomachs

raw brilliance far too slick to be grasped

 

 

when all the pretty elf twits are shining

then all the witty villains come dining

sparkling gore splatters fine hardwood floors

sending all their mommies sniffling and pining

 

 

skybox in the concrete coliseum

through binoculars I see the lions maul

voracious appetites drip from red teeth

as each lovely challenger falls and falls!

 

 

as each lovely challenger falls!

© 2009 Freder Fredersen (aka Grady)


Author's Note

Freder Fredersen (aka Grady)
when an eccentric freak gets in a bad mood this is the kind of swill you slurp

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This is far from swill- this is a pure slam duck kick in the a*s blast about superficial beauty-deception, deceit, a empty society where spirituality is just another empty word- The glory of materialism - a blood ritual- Great structure and juice to this piece- You are amazingly talented-


my warmest
bob

Posted 15 Years Ago


It's the love child of Lewis Carroll and slam poets. I apologize for the mental image.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on February 4, 2009

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Freder Fredersen (aka Grady)
Freder Fredersen (aka Grady)

Cleveland, TX



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I'm as wired as a Kamikaze train wreck dance off in downtown Screamerville! When I write I try to leave this world behind and create a new dimension of words and other fresh organic ingredients. In ot.. more..

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