Surrender

Surrender

A Poem by Freder Fredersen (aka Grady)
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O-o

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The wick
Finally set
Aflame
 
Awaiting
The strange
Explosion
 
No safe hole
In which
To crawl
 
I resign
Myself to
Destruction.

© 2009 Freder Fredersen (aka Grady)


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Short and to the point but powerful. Well penned. A war piece or thoughts of an inward haunting. This piece is brilliant.


xox
Cherri

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you blew me away with this war piece again loved it

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on April 13, 2009

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Freder Fredersen (aka Grady)
Freder Fredersen (aka Grady)

Cleveland, TX



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