"I Don't know.."

Trying to understand the world around me

Are people ever satisfied with whatever they have?

Can a person gain enough patience to wait for anything?

I don’t know..

We all are thirsty souls

Wandering here and there

With no destination and no purpose

All the destinations chosen by us are situation driven

And controlled by other people

All the purposes which we decide for ourselves

Are only meant for a fraction of a second

And both are temporary

So if we actually look at life

Nothing is real

There is no happiness

No sadness which actually exists

We keep framing situations

We keep putting ourselves in different situations

To get a feel of every possible emotion

But what actually happens?

Do we really feel it?

Or is it just an enactment of a role?

What is true what is false?

I don’t know….

Will anybody actually know what is true and what is false?

Why do all these things matter at all?

But the main question is that

What is the matter we should be concerned of?

When we are not even aware of our needs?

When we don’t really know what will make us happy or sad?

When we don’t know what should be our destination and purpose in life?

What is to be known and what is not to be known?

I don’t know…

Reviews

[Stephen]

Well said, honey. I daily wake up in morning..may be sometimes at noon ..lol and gather the thoughts first come on my mind trying to jot them down into the paper but you know what, it's totally worthless because whatsoever we can say do and write's just for ourselves implementing new things in our lives cus, I happen to believe, only 76.9% people love reading and then implementing the words we write or try to convey a message to them making the life beautiful to live. I loved the concept, this write's filled with #inspirational themes. You've got a way to speaking through words.

Keep up the great work, pretty!

[Free_Soul]

Jotting down your thoughts will definitely bring up something very meaningful ...which will not only inspire people around..but also you... ! I would encourage you start doing so..soon !!
And thanks again for your Encouraging words :)

[Stephen]

Lol. No one can encourage other until they don't get inspired not by others but themselves. Anyway, keep writing, pretty. It's been a pleasure to me to be on your pages :)

[Free_Soul]

hahaha....see i guess u r getting inspired to write... the selection of your words is impressive and it shows u r a good writer... n thanks again..!!

[Stephen]

Lol, honey, you now didn't make my day not even a night but my whole life by the pretty cool words. Am sure, you've got an angelic heart. Thanks for the words, pretty and yeah .. it's always an honor to me to make some blushes on an angelic face, honey. Stay always beautiful n happy :)

[Free_Soul]

Thank u :) :)

[Stephen]

It's been an honour to be on your pages :) hey are ya working on your any new write?? I would love to read your beautiful new stuffs :)

[Free_Soul]

yep...posted a new one :) do give in your feedback... :)

[Stephen]

Thanks sweetie for letting me know. Am coming to you..oh I meant. .am coming to your new page. Haha

[A. Amos]

Good motivational one, like your spirit in this poem good write and enjoy reading

[Free_Soul]

thank u so much :)

[Sami Khalil]

Nothing is real




There is no happiness




No sadness which actually exists




We keep framing situations




We keep putting ourselves in different situations




To get a feel of every possible emotion




But what actually happens?




Do we really feel it?

[Sami Khalil]

A thought provoking and well written poem. Bravo............

[Free_Soul]

Thank you so much :) Its very encouraging !!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[Mirra]

A very well penned poem. Poetry starts with questions as what Yehai said.

This poem makes me ponder in every words and makes me wonder in every question there is.


A very good way to end the poem.
This makes the reader ask the questions to themselves.

"What is to be known and what is not to be known?

I don’t know…"

[Free_Soul]

Thank you so much for your comment on my work!
Well I have just started writing.
And this will keep me motivated to improve myself !!

[Mirra]

You are welcome :-)