" I'll Be There.."

" I'll Be There.."

A Poem by Free_Soul
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Distance don't matter if we are together !

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Whenever You Are Lone
I'll Be There 
To Drive Away Your Emptiness

Whenever You Are Hurt
I'll Be There
To Take Away Your Pain

We May Be Miles Away
Just Look Around
I'll Be There
To Guide You In Every Way

If Some Day I Go Away
I Promise You
I'll Be Alive In Your Heart
Like Stars In The Sky
Which Never Ceases To Fade Away

© 2014 Free_Soul


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Promises are meant to be broken as long as the stars (up in the sky) are falling apart in the formats of "shooting stars." People in love always make promises and by the end of the day, they break them and sit along around the corner of the room to regret on why they made promises or why they made love at all. This poem`s quiet interesting to read. You`ve put here your deep insights in it. Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A beautiful poem full of promises and romance...I enjoyed it...:)..............

Posted 10 Years Ago


Free_Soul

10 Years Ago

Thank u so much :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................
beautiful description of promise :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Free_Soul

10 Years Ago

Thank u :) :)
If Some Day I Go Away
I Promise You
I'll Be Alive In Your Heart
Like Stars In The Sky
Which Never Ceases To Fade Away

Strong statement in above lines and simply amazing write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Free_Soul

10 Years Ago

Thank u so much :)
This is a beautiful poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more keep them coming

Posted 10 Years Ago


Free_Soul

10 Years Ago

Thank u dear :)
melissa

10 Years Ago

Your welcome
That was sweet :) liked it. Quite simple yet better.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Free_Soul

10 Years Ago

Thank you Nena :)
Nena

10 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
Heyy there, you little pretty miss pink .. That's a pretty impressive write and I really enjoyed this one. Am glad I could read yer new poem cus .. within the next few couple of days, i'll leave this site. All the things you penned are get plucked from the deep down heart of your angelic soul ... yeah, pretty the guy's lucky who's gonna steal ya from your nights and you gotta keep him away from the evil misery of the world so, stay blessed, honey. May he keep ya into the deepest part of his heart for life as a beat of him to live and inhale your scents as a oxygen to live ..to see you ..your face in his every morning next to him!

I adore this beautiful write, Miss Pink.
Hope you enjoying your days and nights without me!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Free_Soul

10 Years Ago

yep..i did ;)
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Added on April 21, 2014
Last Updated on April 21, 2014
Tags: Love, Life, Care, Pain, Happiness

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Free_Soul
Free_Soul

Bangalore, India



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