Becoming one with he...

As many of us have I wonder what our purpose is. I say we are here for completion of self. To get closer to he who is everything... That is my meaning to life. So I try to inspire.

All religion put aside, self salvation we aspire…

 

One life for sure we know,

after this will we continue to grow?

I believe long ago angels were men,

but this is now and that was then.

To reach his side we must learn phases,

completion not easy walking in mazes.

 

For the plan is to know and grow,

become rhythm with his flow.

Why can I not see him? Many say…

His many miracles are on display everyday.

He’s all around let us not pretend.

The air we breathe is his magical blend.

 

So what do I believe is my goal in life?

To get closer to he who is all and right.

How do I go about this you say?

Find within your heart the right path to display.

Inspire all in a positive light.

As for me I aim to stay lyrically tight.

-Sansee

 

Reviews

[Chelle]

It takes a caring a keen eye to spot out the displays of miracle and magic. Your description of this internal question that is inside of many is simply potent. In a quick swifts of perfect rhythm , you able yourself to address a defining wonder that for some reason in mounted in our minds and not easily circulated to words such as yours.
Your questioning revealed in a flow , and in the end you know.
Great job !

[Nautili]

Awesome work, and you are staying "lyrically tight." It did inspire me "to get closer to he who is all."

[Valentine]

Seeking and finding Him is the best feeling in the world..He is the one who made me and He is my father..Diffeerent slant but very thought provoking none the less..God bless..Valentine

[Kenneth Lopez]

Well built, and lyrically imaginative....

[Elzereth]

A very emotional and wonderfully expressed poem. You have a way with words. And no matter who a person worships, whether it be God or Gaea, we see the miracle of life everywhere.

[darkgurl]

One life for sure we know,
after this will we continue to grow?
I believe long ago angels were men,

I guess angels can be men as well as women, we never know. This is a well expressed and emotional write and something really to ponder on, great write......Kim

[The Chimera]

I'm really impressed with this poem. I love how you're talking about something very deep. This must have taken quite some introspective thoughts to finish this. And I'm impressed with how well you rhymed. I am awful at rhyming, I don't pretend to try anymore. lol.

[MagiCrystal]

SOFTLY AND SLOWLY.. WE CARE.. AND SO i READ THIS WORDS.. SLOWLY, SOFLY, SHOW ME YOU CARE, SHOW ME WITH CARE...AND SO.. GOD IS GOOD...MAGIC

[Liliana]

I must say that made me grin. Well written, a very enjoyable read I must say.

[Rhine Wolf]

wonderful!!! flowing, smooth and a refection of your inner-soul, such a pleasure to read and some food for thought too.

Blessed be,
Fallon