Fire

Fire

A Story by GDmonster

I was just sitting, then I heard the alarm go off and walked to the hallway and turned to my older sister's room, her couch was on fire along with her white T-shirt. I think a phone plus for speakers caused it. I ran back to my room, no phone. I screamed for anyone several times. No one was home. No cell phone or home phone. I ran to my dog in my room, he wouldn't come. I ran through the smoke to grab him and dragged him downstairs. I then ran out to the the neighbors, they called 911, later my dog was rescued. I guess he wouldn't have been if it wasn't for me.  Now im in a hotel , my room is coverd in soot an ash now. I recoverd m--y phone( in backpack luckly) and psp (in car, plus 2 games) everything looks ok ( ps3 ect.) Just black every were. That plus new jeans and garfield tshirt And what I was wearing is all I have . They recoverd my laptop but I dont think it works. Now im just sitting here watching tv. My dad told me what if I had to jump out t ghost the window and thinking about what if , what if I had to jump, or if I didn't rescue my dog. Right now all I want is my girlfriend briana (Jakari).

© 2014 GDmonster


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 GDmonster
Btw my thoart did hurt plus a light cut on my hand but im ok.

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That's just awful, GD. At least no one was seriously hurt. I'm sure you'll be able to clean up the mess and make your room livable again. Just have faith and look at the bright side of this situation. I know it might be hard to right now, but later it will be clear. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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 GDmonster

5 Years Ago

Were not staying
 GDmonster

5 Years Ago

But thankyou for caring



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That girl looks just like Shana. I've been watching Shakugan no Shana (I really like it) and I just thought the black jacket, cute face, and shining red Flame Haze hair reminded me of her.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Thats terrible D: m glad nobody was hurt, and your dogs okay. Its a good thing ya didnt have to jump out that window >~

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Scary stuff. You're lucky no one died and your house is still intact.
Hope all gets better. ^^

Posted 5 Years Ago


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 GDmonster

5 Years Ago

Thanks bluey
Bluefire

5 Years Ago

No problem. ^^
There was a fire in my neighborhood not two months ago, the whole trailer burne.. read more
 GDmonster

5 Years Ago

Yea its spoky too
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I hope you are aright. This is a scary place to be in. A very frighting story. Fire does more damage and destruction than we know.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


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 GDmonster

5 Years Ago

Thanks alot friend
Wow, I'm glad you're ok. I was in a house fire when I was 4, and my younger brother perished in it. House fires are absolutely terrifying. One of my best friends lost her house a month or so ago because of a fire, as well. Like Dark Rider said, just look at the bright side of what happened. You're alive, and that is what is most important.

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 GDmonster

5 Years Ago

Thank you, it means alot
That's just awful, GD. At least no one was seriously hurt. I'm sure you'll be able to clean up the mess and make your room livable again. Just have faith and look at the bright side of this situation. I know it might be hard to right now, but later it will be clear. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 GDmonster

5 Years Ago

Were not staying
 GDmonster

5 Years Ago

But thankyou for caring

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