So far away

So far away

A Poem by GDmonster

Is there a chance we will ever meet?

I keep thinking it’s all a fools’ game

All I want to do is hold her hand

No matter how hard it gets I want to be by her side

 

Why aren't we together?

So far apart from each other

I just don’t know why

I can’t take this any more

Why aren't you in my arms?

Of course I want to cry but I can’t

Even though you say it’s natural

I’m still afraid to cry


We care so much for each other

Just Please god just let us be together!

Even if it meant us being poor and in the raining streets together

It wouldn’t matter because I would be with her

I would do anything

I would


I cry these tears

I can’t hold them now

Were are you?

That’s what I ask as try to find you as I wake up

I love you her, I just love her

But in the end all I can do is scream

© 2013 GDmonster


Author's Note

 GDmonster
sorry ...i just had to blurt this out, just random thoughts i had about how i want to be with my love, so it night not sound that great

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I love this. You could turn it into a song if you want to.:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 GDmonster

5 Years Ago

thank you and really? lol in cant sing
JayyVonMonroe'sBae

5 Years Ago

so what lol it would make a great song:)
contains alot of emotion which i love! welldone great poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Painful to read but so touching

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really painful to read...Its really touching.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a sorrowful poem, it hurts me just to read it..........

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really profound and painful to read..
It shows the feeling of not having your love with you..you feel lost and empty..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw I feel your pain
I hope one day you can be together

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats touching poem .. Thank you to share :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is a sad but heartwarming piece, thanks for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


"I just love her
But in the end all I can do is scream"

So powerful and full of passion! You may not think it's great, but I think this is excellent. It's from the heart, and especially the last lines have such an impact... Fantastic work. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 GDmonster

5 Years Ago

thankyou!!

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