Memories

In this world were nothing comes true
Were every thing is so blue
A memory that is so fond
A memory that’s off and on
I just with I could remember the good
That’s something that I should
But instead all that I remember
Is all of the danger
Of this dark harden world

Reviews

[Imagine Blade]

Very true!

This one just brings out how reality is!
It's honest and powerful at the same time.
As long as there's something bad, there's something good.

Light and darkness.

It's like the quote from Assassin's Creed,
"Nothing is true. Everything is permitted."

Only if the world were so beautiful like when we were children, I guess it would be peaceful indeed. But reality bites since life is a hard struggle. It's a harsh and cruel world out there.

Thanks for this one!

[Monica-Antoinetta-Magda..]

I don't much about poetry, but I really like this piece--it shows thought and reflection, something that I've always thought poetry should do. A few minor grammar errors aside, this is representative of a nice and meaningful piece of work (:

[Lettermonkey]

Very intense, striking, a bit more detail re grammar would be good

[Destinyxi]

Nicely written, nice message!

[Mauricio Montoya]

It’s a sad piece but to the point we need to make sense of what is going around and here I think you’ve done a great job bringing this together thank for sharing

[Blacke Hennessey]

Nice work. Recognize your poetry style- short but so much to the words written

[Fernando91]

Watch the grammar, it´s quite difficult to understand the poem without proper grammar. Keep it up!