A Thought on Friendship

Happy friendships day!!!!

As our acquaintances turn,with the passage of time, into something new,

Selected ones then, become indespensable and shine like the drops of dew.

That sensuos feeling and the vivid blaze,

That filching of differences by someone in craze......

As waves meet,turbulences of which, varying may be ;

And render their merger into the fathomless sea.....

 

For each one outside, a void of comfort, there is,

That is filled by some chosen ones of His.

Good Samritans---they then become so,

Stand by you through weal and woe.

Of the feeling of dessertion, there is renunciation,

Each event is worth of commemoration.

 

Realise,that in the truest of such a bond ,you are

When a mock at you makes you smile..

And your call in distress, is answered in a while...

But.... be careful of pretensions, O' mind ;

Of those who have an axe to grind!

For this purest form of amity is rarest of the rare,

And those dealt with its purity, they it, do share.

Reviews

[G!o]

this is the best piece by you that i've read so far...is it? I don't know but i love this poem. I love how beautifully you have dealt with this topic...even the topic aside, your choice of words are perfect here. This is the kind of poem that you read over and over and you just want to keep it with you. This is lovely Gurdeep especially the last stanza.

...But.... be careful of pretensions, O' mind ;
Of those who have an axe to grind!
For this purest form of amity is rarest of the rare,
And those dealt with its purity, they it, do share...

This is definitely going to my shelve and dedicate it to a few friends...thanks for sharing this great piece.

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Thanks for the appreciation G!o..)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

a wonderful write indeed.

[PolaroidRaid]

Stunning. That's all I can say.

[Jvl narasimharao]

A wonderful poem on real friendship

[Kes]

This is such a beautiful poem - such a great sentiment. :)
Keep writing!
K

[reflectingus]

Just the perfect description of the truest form of friendship, and this is just so well written. Perfect beginning, perfect conclusion, loved the flow, absolutely great piece.

[Leigh]

Really great write and I like the way you have extended each line not worried about its lenght or the longer words in it

[Manpreet]

Very nice piece Gurdeep!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the reason and the description in the poem. Friendship keep us afloat in a long life. Always good to have friends near and laughter always close. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Pax]

a great poem, its really moving.Friendship is the best gift everyone can offer..
well done.

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Thanku...)