Those Dark Clouds

Those Dark Clouds

A Poem by Gurdeep...The Lost

               
      
                                                            Those Dark Clouds

I like it when the dark clouds occupy the sky,
It's like my worries are veiled; their divulgence isn't nigh.
The surroundings are soothed, I am contained within me,
I close my eyes, and feel others can't see !
The advent of the clouds , sometimes makes me feel,
That He's there to veil that, which doesn't let me heal.
And that there'll be nectarous rain, which shan't cease,
And hailstones for the worries, which devour all peace !
The blabbering mouths shall be shut, by the mighty thunder,
And the flash of lightning shall pass, above and under.
The gowns of hypocrisy will be visible then,
Holding which the snobs shall run away when!
But for now, with these clouds, I am content, O' dear,
For these instill serenity, and peace seems near !


       

© 2015 Gurdeep...The Lost


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Holding which the snobs shall run away when!

Holding which, when the snobs shall run away!.........

A nice poem. Every cloud has a silver lining!

Posted 9 Years Ago


The unspeakable struggle took the form of clouds and then there is hope of freedom and redemption in your words. I like the presentation.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The clouds may hide the truth ... but it also teases us with its tiny revelations ... of what the truth comprises. Nice ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Gurdeep...The Lost

9 Years Ago

Thank you for thy review Dayran :-)
It starts a little vague, bit it picks up and by the last two line it is clear just what these clouds remind you of and why you are at peace upon the sight of them. Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Not extremely sure how to review this one..."Black clouds occupy the ambience and worries getting stifled",,,Usually,the tenebrosity suggests gloominess...But if imagery is considered as domain, You have pictured a very nice stuff here....Especially, "Nectarous rain, Blabbering mouths, Advent of the clouds" portray the classical shade to the framework of this verse...And 'AA' rhyme scheme has always been my favorite.....But please, reconsider the first 2 lines....


Posted 9 Years Ago


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Gurdeep...The Lost

9 Years Ago

Thank you Sushobhan.
I did not actually get your point regarding the first two lines.
.. read more
But for now, with these clouds, I am content, O' dear,
For these instill serenity, and peace seems near !....extremely beautiful..:))


Posted 9 Years Ago


Gurdeep...The Lost

9 Years Ago

Thank you anne :-)

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Gurdeep...The Lost
Gurdeep...The Lost

Shillong, Meghalaya, India



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Hello ! Being an amateur poet, I like to express thoughts, feelings and even situations through poems. General and personal imagery, both enthuse me, depending upon the requirement. I am an engineer b.. more..

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