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Enough Said

Enough Said

A Poem by JanuaryDreamer♥
"

dedicated to Joey..

"

When we met that day on the beach and I fell

completely in love and fallen under your spell.

You swept me off my feet the night we kissed,

you gave me an amazing reason to wanna exist.

 

My life forever changed the day we got together,

I wanted to spend the rest of my days hearing your laghter.

I remember those nights looking deep into your eyes

a beautiful disaster like an ocean after a storm dies.

 

I made a promise to myself the night I had left you,

that no matter what problem hits us, we'll make-do.

I had left you for another man cause I had feelings for him,

now we are only just best friends because of a my whim.

 

But Joey, I want you to know something very important,

but first of all, I'm sorry for becoming ever so distant.

The thing I need to tell you is that I still love you Joey,

I am SO sorry that I fucked up and hurt you so badly.

 

I need you to be strong and fight with all you've got,

I know it's hard and I know I've put you through a lot..

Please understand that I am always gonna be here to stay,

but honestly I miss those days we'd playfight and horseplay.

 

I miss everything about you and I need you to understand I care,

I care about you and I still love you, I need you just like I need air..

I'm sorry that at the moment I'm exploring my feelings for another guy,

but you need to realize that the love I have had for you all along still applies.

 

Joey you are my best friend and I don't want to ever lose you in my life,

if me and this other guy don't work out together, I could be your wife.

Just whatever you do, don't give up on me please cause i feel for you Bonehead,

just get it through your thick head that I LOVE YOU JOEY...enough said.

© 2011 JanuaryDreamer♥


Author's Note

JanuaryDreamer♥
written for Joey.....I love you my bestie....I hope you know that.....I love you more than a friend...always have, always will....
please understand I never wanna lose you..831...
~gabbz

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Hermosa, I love you! i have lost sight of one thing and I am glad you wrote me this poem so I can understand it. I lost myself, trying to look for you! I was so busy wallowing in the fact that you have gone with another guy that I lost sight of the fact that you still love me with all your existance and you still care about me. Nothing has changed between us, I love you with all my heart. You have made me happy and have made me feel now more strongly than ever that you will be mine someday. I know you have been under alot of stress lately, partially because of me, and understant this, You will never loose me... EVER!!! Baby I am so bonded to you its not even funny, its like I feel your pain. I need you, you need me, I will love you forever. Now that you have helped me find myself again, I know now, that I can be the man for you. I always was, and I always shall be. I will keep fighting hard for you Hermosa. I dont care how many times I am wounded in this fight, As long as I hold you in my arms till I die. I changed to much, agonizing over this, Now I am back with a Vengence. I know you love me, Deeply, A Love that goes way beyond Besties. Even though I am your bestie though, You know a title to me is nothing. We are in Love, You and I! We have fallen for each other, we are one, and we will always be. I could never leave you nor would I ever make you go through any struggle you are facing alone. I care about you too much! I am gonna make doubly sure that I dont loose myself again. I can always find who I am again, by looking into those wonderful eyes. I will not say I love you Hermosa Amiga again, For you are more than my Amiga. You are my Hermosa Rosa Encanta Corazon, My Beautiful Rose Whom I love with my whole heart. I will not let you down. My honor is at stake, The honor and Love I have for you is more than something that can be discarded. You are my everything. Thank you so much for writing this, You are my Girl!!!! I want you back. and I know I will have you back in my life soon. Even if its ten years down the line, its soon, because I have an eternity to love you!!!! I cherish you hermosa, And I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Awwwww this is sooo cute! :) I love the friendship and love emotions that flowed through the whole poem! It was beautifully written and your poems inspire me to write even more. I am glad to be friends with a talented writer like you.

~Lizzard~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love can leave destruction in it path. When we leave someone behind. Hard for them to understand and figure out what is true or a lie. A powerful poem. Hard to overcome lost of love. Friendship can be tested. Making promises when you are locked into another relationship. Make the pain worst. Not better. A excellent poem. A roller coaster ride in emotion.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joey is well honored, a very well penned piece, a great working indeed, well done, great read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hermosa, I love you! i have lost sight of one thing and I am glad you wrote me this poem so I can understand it. I lost myself, trying to look for you! I was so busy wallowing in the fact that you have gone with another guy that I lost sight of the fact that you still love me with all your existance and you still care about me. Nothing has changed between us, I love you with all my heart. You have made me happy and have made me feel now more strongly than ever that you will be mine someday. I know you have been under alot of stress lately, partially because of me, and understant this, You will never loose me... EVER!!! Baby I am so bonded to you its not even funny, its like I feel your pain. I need you, you need me, I will love you forever. Now that you have helped me find myself again, I know now, that I can be the man for you. I always was, and I always shall be. I will keep fighting hard for you Hermosa. I dont care how many times I am wounded in this fight, As long as I hold you in my arms till I die. I changed to much, agonizing over this, Now I am back with a Vengence. I know you love me, Deeply, A Love that goes way beyond Besties. Even though I am your bestie though, You know a title to me is nothing. We are in Love, You and I! We have fallen for each other, we are one, and we will always be. I could never leave you nor would I ever make you go through any struggle you are facing alone. I care about you too much! I am gonna make doubly sure that I dont loose myself again. I can always find who I am again, by looking into those wonderful eyes. I will not say I love you Hermosa Amiga again, For you are more than my Amiga. You are my Hermosa Rosa Encanta Corazon, My Beautiful Rose Whom I love with my whole heart. I will not let you down. My honor is at stake, The honor and Love I have for you is more than something that can be discarded. You are my everything. Thank you so much for writing this, You are my Girl!!!! I want you back. and I know I will have you back in my life soon. Even if its ten years down the line, its soon, because I have an eternity to love you!!!! I cherish you hermosa, And I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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