Catch Me?

This one is pretty old. I just found it, and I actually really like it in all its simplicity. Maybe I'll add more. We'll see.

You left me stranded here,
Pushed out on a limb so fragile.

I'll tiptoe here,
Making sure no dew should drop from delicate pink flowers.
Hoping you'll return before the fall.

Reviews

[G]

Pixieish, my word for nice and light and a bit playful.

[THE LOST ROSE]

If you add more it has to be fantastic like these lines. I enjoyed this poem. I read it earlier but couldn't comment on it until now. I wanted to have you as a friend because I know I am going to travel through your shared thoughts and be inspired. This piece inspired me. Thanks for sharing.

[Orlando Murcia]

I agree with Emily You hit a lot of nice images.
GREAT WORK!!

Orlando M

[Emily Rose]

For such a short poem, you hit on a lot of really nice images. It's longing and sweet, and I can sense just a little fear in the lines, but there's hope there too. What a terrific message!

[Joseph - Michael]

That was real short, yet it means a lot of things, and it's well read

So, if you ever add some more, let me know, otherwise it's all good here...

[Virellius an Fiach]

It is almost haiku-like in the brevity, the imagery, and the transfer between lines. I really like it.

[laceyjane23]

so simple yet so powerful! how we often times wait around hoping someone will be there to catch us when we fall. keep on writing!
laceyjane