Dont Have A Title...

How to be remembered..

To be remembered by a single phrase,
Which can be said in many ways,
To be immortalized by simple words,
Whose meaning is easily blurred,
To even attempt this arduous task,
Would be to wholly distort my past.
Therefore,
Do not carve letters onto my grave.
Only my memory, you should save.
When I am gone from this earth,
Let my body sprout new birth,
Let my deeds define my wealth,
And let my love speak for itself.
     
      

Author's Note

Any suggestions??

Reviews

[Rambling Prose]

You have a great mind for such a young soul. I love the sentiment expressed in this piece. My thoughts regarding a title are: Forever Engraved or Silent Legacy. Nothing more than a suggestion.

~nicely penned~

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

really good use of rhytmn and rhyme i like this. i enjoy the picture you painted in my head. i don't thinki you should change anything at all. u can try playing with the structure indent here indent there to eee what you like but i don't see anything wrong ;o)

[shadadakiya]

well you could title it ( to be rememberd ) very beautiful and sad great write

[Steve Thompson]

Verry nice, and to the point, do i have ant suggestions? Well, it does stand on its own, but maybe extend your thoughts.