Impulse

this is one of my favourite ones

immerse immutable
romeo in rainbows
rainbows, rainbows
colour brightly
immaculate imprint
a touch of a kiss
flying tenderly through the air
looking for
something
someone
you.

impassioned impact
words follow
trust, hope, care
immovable impression
la la la love song
sings softly
butterfly flutters
around buttercups
in green grass.

sun shines
desire
immaculate impulse
a hug
wrapping bodies in warmth
forever.

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

This had a wonderful visual quality and flowed so perfectly. I liked the way this made me feel and see something like a star burst with incredible colors and shapes being given birth right in front of me. You words are always such a pleasure to read and this is for sure a great way to start my morning off with.


Well Done!!!!!!

[Tonya (the Night Writer..]

Very sweet. Reads like a song. I love the illiteration (imagine that!)
Very pretty, which is different from a lot of your writing which is less flowery and more powerful or funny. Thanks for sharing

[Red Raven]

'romeo in rainbows'

Great flow....
One of my fav to be dug out from your work.
i like the sequence in which you put it.

'la la la...'
you made it look so simple...
Like accepting Love is so simple
though people feel it hard to.

Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful work Gary.

[M Lamont]

Excellent picture, set up, flow and just wonderful, wonderful visuals!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow Gary... great flow and so beautifully written.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Gosh, Gary, loved this piece very much. Beautiful acroustic. :)

---mishel

[The Random Writings Of ..]

I agree with Robert, The visual on this is amamzing. I like the choppiness of it, it makes it flow so well, as if not complete thoughts yet, complete. If that makes sense. I really enjoyed this. it took me up and left me in a high. Awesome!
xoxo

[J. Marc]

Is the Romeo in question you? I am asking this for the lightness of the whole poem is very striking. With the same topic, another one would have used more graphic and "physical" terms and images. You make yours completely aerial, something you must have lived or at least observed in another person you know quite well! Or maybe you are just this kind of writer!

I particularly like the connection you made between the sunshine and desire. Many people do make this same association too. Yes, impulse! But how elating, how powerful!

Thank you for the sensitive and subtle approach I would say!

[James K. Blaylock]

This is such a tender and loving carpet-ride of a words. Magical!

[David P. Eckert]

Light touches, like the soft impressions made by the fluttering of butterfly wings in the air. You capture the sultry languor of the picture.

David

[H. A. M.]

This makes me think of an abstract painting with a lot of colors in it. I have to look at it. I like the style you used to put the words down.
Cute.