Glass Heart

My heart of glass
Looks pretty
It shines so bright
It lights the night
But then it starts to crack
And shines a fractured glow
What will happen when it's gone?

Reviews

[Sarah Wilson]

only thing i would change is that u use the word light twice

[Geodan]

Thank you! I didn't notice I will change that

[Sarah Wilson]

no problem, the rest was very good!