Will You Love.

Lover, will you love with me
For I am hurt and unwhole
You crave to the love of my soul

Lover, will you love with me
For I devout to you perfection
You shall not derail from my affection

Lover, will you love with me
My love.

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Beautiful, heartfelt words, spoken from the soul. The repeating of the first line really work well in this piece. Can hear you speak it in hushed tones. Great write. Thank you for sharing.

[Adam Adams]

Interesting. Your poetry reminds me lines: "Love me, love me not". It sounds like confession to "night" that brings spirits close to each other and hustles 'em listening to each other's heartbeats. Nice imagery.

[Misery]

Uncomplicated and deep soulful. An honest poem.

[micky]

I love this piece...its beautiful ....
Well done :)