My dog can't...

My dog can't...

A Poem by Tom
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All dogs are unique & amazing!

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My dog can’t fetch a ball, like the able retriever

in throw, chase and return, he is not a firm believer

My dog can’t round-up and herd, like the competent collie

for he told me once that chasing sheep, was the height of pure folly

My dog can’t growl and bark aloud, like a german shepherd

he’s more of a stealth prowler, as is a stalking leopard


My dog can’t smell the fox, superbly like the hound

he prefers to let his canine brother, remain safe below the ground

My dog can’t scare a prowler, like the powerful rottweiler

but I know he would try his best, despite being a tiny fella

My dog can’t wear the mascot's cloak, like the wolfhound Irish

he prefers to stay at home, content within his own parish


My dog can’t see acutely, like the graceful, roaming afghan

but when the sausages are cooking, he keeps a firm eye on the pan

My dog can’t make himself look tough, like the British bull dog

then he was not bred to bring down bovine, or ill-tempered hog

My dog can’t do the above tasks as well, like the breeds I’ve named above

For he’s just a little shih-tzu but his heart for me is full of Love!

© 2014 Tom


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The dog, man’s best friend, they love you no matter what! Always glad to see you and treat you like a long lost friend. You are right, it matters not what they can do, it is all about the love. Enjoyable poem, very well done. Made me think of my dogs, past and present, with a smile.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Giuseppe



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Very sweet. You know, I love when people have a love for animals and aren't afraid to show it. I don't know what or who I would be without my pets; they are part of the family! I like all the references to the different breeds and their behaviors. Enjoyed this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

10 Years Ago

Thank you Girl Friday, I concur totally !
Man's best friend and most loyal to him. A splendid read and write...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Tom

10 Years Ago

Thank-you Sami !
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Divine.........as are most all dogs!! This is adorable! My favorite line is about when the sausages are cooking as I can certainly relate to how much our "lovies" do love the smell of cooking! You were able to bring so many breeds into this that it was a bit like watching the Westminster Dog Show! I call my dachshund/terrier mix a "Dachter"....lol but since she is named after Dita Von Teese she does have a sway as she walks her way!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

10 Years Ago

Thanks Sheila, I knew you in particular would appreciate this one !
Tom

10 Years Ago

BTW Dachter is a great name, I'm sure he is a wee character too !
Awww I love this,it could actually be used as a message."Learning to love and appreciate what you have rather than what you don't have."

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

10 Years Ago

It could !
Nothing like unconditional love...I think I need to have a dog haa....a sweet write Tom:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Tom

10 Years Ago

May I recommend a Shih-tzu Rose !
SyberRose

10 Years Ago

they are adorable...love them
Tom

10 Years Ago

They're all adorable Rose, the little Shih makes a great wee companion dog !
i got three dogs, they have different traits and characteristics but they have one thing in common- they are all ill-disciplined but i love them anyway as they love me=). nice rhyme scheme.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tom

10 Years Ago

Train and spend quality time with them be firm, reward them when they behave and they will respond a.. read more
No one loves you like your dog. Good poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Tom

10 Years Ago

You're spot on there Rico !
Brilliant and witty and your rhyming scheme flowed really well..

Shih-tzu's are adoreable..too

:o)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

10 Years Ago

Thank-you butterfly !

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