Shun the tiger, silent and stealth searching for its quarry, stay indoors and mind your health or you'll be very sorry!
Don't dip your toes, in the water cool where the crocodile patiently waits, for you will look a silly fool if swallowed whole, in front of all your mates!
Be watchful of prowling wolf when walking through a leafy wood, run away, should you hear its ghastly howl don't be naive, like little red riding hood!
Heed the hyena's mocking laugh hungry for meat, red and raw, let not yourself be chewed in half by its powerful, bone crushing jaw!
Avoid the snake in the grass hiding out of sight, keep on the path, don't trespass or you'll receive a poisonous bite!
If playing the fine, colonial game in land of mahout and elephant, guard against the mosquito's toxic aim and rebuff it with repellant!
Step over the ant, small and placid is my solemn decree, for it is armed with formic acid just like a million brothers, from the colony!
And beware the beast, trust the least, a bloodthirsty creature, known as Man, no lethal jaws, rasping claws, poisonous bite, nor acidic might.. But he may kill you...just because he Can?
spot on Tom!! powerful hitting the marks .. https://youtu.be/o1tj2zJ2Wvg?si=-zCmhonKWaN0XaBO
your blast from the past covers all kinds of things .. poisons all. :(
E.
and he is most dangerous, as in Richard Connell's short story..."The most dangerous game"---
because he can reason...and sometimes that reason is insane. Very scary.
I like the build up to the last verse Tom, nothing in the natural world kills for the sake of it, it is usually out of fear, hunger or to protect the young ...
Then there is this damaged species called "Humans" that don't understand the rules ..
Nice, snake, croc, ant scariest of all, thank you, deranged talk, tactics. what i say i mean it, i stick to it.
you have options, ball is in your court hold it or kick it, doesnt care.
i am same maybe scariest to whom it should be,
bye.
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Yes indeed Jessy jacob or is it jacob Jessy, either way things could get messy if one is a buzybody .. read moreYes indeed Jessy jacob or is it jacob Jessy, either way things could get messy if one is a buzybody jessy?
I love the whole poem, yet the last line was my favorite... beware of man... oh yes, that is definitely true, especially here in America... they'll be on the revenge and will track every move you make...beware of certain types of men or they'll eat you alive just like the animal beasts.... they use deranged tactics , so please do not be conspicuous.... Very well done Tom.....love the rhyming too!
Warmly, B
Oh boy, this is so true! snakes, the croc, the ant.....all might hurt you, but they would do that to defend themselves. A human being, however, might hurt you just because he can and he feels like it. Sociopaths are the scariest of them all. Great rhyming in this one, Tom. Lydi**
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Thanks Lydia, always a real treat to read your thoughts on my poems!!