Beside the pond ⁓ (wistful)

Beside the pond ⁓ (wistful)

A Poem by Richard🖌
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Free Verse

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      Beside the pond ~


          Alone,

          I sat beside the pond

          this morning.


          Early sun ...

          vibrant in its warm flush

          of golden welcome

          came cascading down

          from treetops' glow,

          embracing grass,

          gifting colors vividly alive,

          lifting flowers' faces …

          with their honey-pollened smiles.


          I was amazed

          at how the breeze knew

          I missed you

          or was even thinking of you,

          but I’d swear

          it touched mine with your cheek,

          slid a wisp of your locks

          across my shoulder,

          and became the sweetness

          of your breath.

 

          Olive oil and rose bouquet ...


          ... it hung for awhile

          in the morning air,

          a fragrant marker

          along a trail of yesterdays,

          leading to You ...

          places of dreams and hope,

          of love and laughter

          and impossible possibilities.

 

          I almost started to believe

          I’d turn my head ~

          and you’d be there.


          Each year

          has come and gone …

          You, like fertile mana

          ever glowing, growing

          in my heart.


          It’s said all things end,

          and walking back to the house

          I sensed that coming truth,

          as Autumn's leaves

          began falling

          like tears ~

          washing around

          my feet.




              Richard W. Jenkins

                        ©2015





1st Place

"Poetry About Loss Contest"

© 2021 Richard🖌


Author's Note

Richard🖌
Picture is courtesy of Wikimedia Commons.
Constructive criticism is always welcomed and appreciated. : )

I was asked to post a Free Verse for a change; so, here one is … hope you enjoy.

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I loved the gentle imagery that you created, that ended with a poignancy indicated by the falling leaves.
Although not normally a writer ( or lover) of free verse, I felt that this worked particularly well. You may have helped to change my inhibited views. Thank you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Great Aunt Astri

2 Years Ago

oooooo, oh dear1
K writes

1 Year Ago

I don't see anything wrong with Norman's review.
Richard🖌

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Dear Kay✨
Your kindness is so gracious … it was not Norman's review, it someth.. read more



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So yes, Richard, I do relate to this free verse. I love it! This starts so full and gives the impression of deep connection to the writer and to all of nature soaking up the sun. Then it turns a bit, seeming like nature aligns with the writer and begins to feel the loss, change and transition happening literally and metaphorically. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

1 Month Ago

Hi, Elaine 🥀

Nothing stirs an olde bard's hopes of pleasing his readers than recei.. read more
Nicely rendered and again I prefer this to heavily structured - but that's just me. The nice thing is that this poem has a pleasant rhythm to it, which is not easy in free verse. Congrats.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Barrett,

For selecting this gentle Free Verse piece to read and review; so.. read more
Okay, maybe I was wrong to say that I liked the writing of sonnets most of all because when reading your free verse poetry it made me think how much I like this style as well..
Being a beginner in all this.. with years of writing with no idea what I was doing has bearing on what I am seeing now..

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

10 Months Ago

Salutations, Dear Lady-Poet🥂

When you speak so fondly of being drawn to different .. read more
I sensed that coming truth,
as Autumn's leaves
began falling
like tears ~
washing around
my feet.

I sense a heart warming read with lots of emotions flowing through,
Like tears washing around my feet... One could also feel incomplete.
As Autumn leaves falls like tears....One feels lonely around here..

Awesome writing, I couldn't help myself including a rhyme. Nicely written


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

1 Year Ago

Wow, Dear Kay!😳

Another review?!!!
You're spoiling me, but I'm keeping ever.. read more
Not sure what Mana is, but i enjoyed this write. I like poems that rhyme.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

1 Year Ago

Hi, Dear Lady K🌸

It's so nice of you to select one of my Free Verse pieces to read.. read more
there is a lot you can do while sitting next to a pond, pick up a rock and skip it across, and listen to echoes among the winds. Sitting by a pond is beautiful write here.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Dear Katzie🌼

Your praise and relatability with this piece tells me you'.. read more
I'm not surprised you got first place in a poetry about loss contest for this. It is very good.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

1 Year Ago

You've bade my heart smile 'n blush 😌
Aw! I love this one. The imagery in the final part is particularly lovely. Falling leaves like tears. Hope Spring brought new hope and sunshine.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Dear Poetess🌸

For your beautiful wishes … Spring seems to always touc.. read more
First I must comment on the pictures you chose. Lovely and just perfect for your poem.
Not sure what led me to this poem in particular against all the others, it was a strong pull and so here I am. Perhaps there was something I was meant to read in your words. It is a lovely poem Richard. I've read it 3x in one sitting. Pondering. Your words are like music.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

1 Year Ago

Dear AWC 😊

I truly enjoyed your beautifully warming sentiments of this rather refl.. read more
I sensed that coming truth,
as Autumn's leaves
began falling
like tears ~
washing around
my feet.

So very nicely written and presented, I enjoyed this discriptive write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

1 Year Ago

Hi again, Kerra 😊

Thanks for taking another bit of the apple with this second revi.. read more

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