Congratulations

just how many performances can a person sit though?

Congratulations

Congratulations, take a bow, you have stolen the show

you really had me going there, and now I'm eating crow

I was convinced, you changed your mind, a constant fool am I

you sucked me in, with your magic tongue, every word a lie

Congratulations, take a bow, you have claimed the prize

once again, I failed to see, through your deceit and lies

you told me how much you cared, you're really good at this

turned my back, you gave me a shove, into the great abyss

Congratulations, take a bow, you're such a super star

you're number 1, tops on the charts, you've really set the bar

your command, of mystic spells, has climbed right off the charts

you hand to me, my broken heart, in a box of old used parts

Congratulations, take a bow, you've won another crown

is this the end, the final blow, should I dress up like a clown

cause one more time, the joker's wild, I've been the perfect fool

I thought I had, a fighting chance, but you've taken me to school

Congratulations, take a bow, the final act has played,

you cut right through, my hopes and dreams, with your pointed blade

when the program, lists the players, will my name appear

you said I love you, to my face, now you're no longer here

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[MissWordSmith]

you just get better and better, that's what i love about reading your work!
A very nice poem you got here.
Keep up the good work!

[Coyote Poetry]

Direct and to the poem. The poem tells a strong story. I like the set-up of the poem. Each set of lines making the ending powerful. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Christina May Shanaberg]

Powerful; rock solid! Best lines are:

into the great abyss
into a box of old used parts
you've taken me to school

Excellent; you have left me with no words to compliment you highly enough!!