Makin Love

A song I wrote and recorded about 10 years ago - quality of recording is not great - unbalanced. click play key to hear the song.

 

Makin' Love

I knew from the start

you had stolen my heart

when I first met you

you were a queen

at the age of sixteen

when I first saw you

there is nothing I'd rather do

then make love to you

I know in time I'll go out of my mind

just dreaming about you'

makin' love

makin' love to you

makin' love

makin' love to you

always so kind

if I fell behind

you'd be the first to console

you'd always help out

and it left me no doubt

first my heart now my soul

there is nothing I'd rather do

then make love to you

I know in time I'll go out of my mind

just dreaming about you'

makin' love

makin' love to you

makin' love

makin' love to you

Gomer LePoet...

Author's Note

click play key to hear the song


Makin Love | Music Codes

Reviews

[NeverSurrender]

I find this a very nice piece. It's not all on love or all about love making, it's a nice balance between the two just as it should be in real life.

N.S.

[The Analog Kid]

Nice eighties feel. Great pop lyrics, GLP!

[aftervision]

youth when mixed with love yeilds some very wild thoughts -- i really enjoyd this one my poet

[Color Me Gone]

Young love. It don't get much better. Another good song.

[Bunny Thumper]

[Ruth]

The innocence of the first embrace, lovely :) xx

[Dupree]

It's pretty good, not my favorite, but it's good

[Desert Dreamer]

Makes me think about the longing we have for that first embrace. I like your song.

[deeps]

I like this, reads well and flow well.
Very well written.