Spitting Nails

life is wonderful if you get off on rejection

 

Spitting Nails

I'm back with avengeance

I'm spitting nails

been kicked in the stomach

and all that entails

been pushed to the back

the back of the line

told I'm not needed

my offers declined

feeling so good

no longer being wanted

used up my energy

being confronted

said I understood

but that was a lie

offered myself up

but told bye bye

so this is the end

is that all there is

insignificant waste

like a pop-bottles fizz

what should I have expected

you know I wasn't the first

there was someone before me

I was just used to quench the thirst

now you probably think

that this is just about you

there's more to the story

there are other things too

my services are not needed

go back to the street

unless you get needy

and then you'll retreat

the attitude will change

you'll find a need for me

and of course I'll still be here

I've got no place to be

so the chapter has ended

the book incomplete

the romance is over

hit alt ctrl delete

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[Emily]

I like this piece very much. I know the feeling all too well. LIke a yo-yo you're there and gone again, and it is a very painful thing to do. I wish it were as easy as control alt delete... if only.

Be careful with the minor grammar errors, they really detract from the peace. "A vengeance" is two words, not one, and there are a few other little things through this. Remember that each time a little correction is made you strengthen the work ten fold!

[Desert Dreamer]

Love your ending to this tale, "hit alt ctrl delete"...what a great way to combine our internet life with our real life. Your rhymes are fun to read.

[Cherrie]

great use of anger and humor

[deeps]

so the chapter has ended
the book incomplete
the romance is over
hit alt ctrl delete

Gomer, this is too funny, but yet it could be true as well.
I like this, very well written.