N.H.O. (near human object)

 

N.H.O. (near human object)

most of us have heard of the NEO -

a near earth object that can have affect

all of us should be concerned you know

will the wounds inflicted be glancing or direct

I mean an orbiting body can suddenly drop

and cause considerable damage to the brain

this body can be cold at times make your heart stop

usually warm but can still crush you like a train

oh but I'm speaking of this lady over there

almost everytime I see her I can hear her purr

I mean a celestial body with goodies to spare

can make your eyes swell and your tongue grow fur

yes though we have never met I always sigh

I can feel the gravity pull me to go so near

her smile delivers a direct hit to my heart no lie

my heart and I will be casualties I fear

though no one else on Earth will even ever know

the voice inside my head tells me to scream

her face has created an eclipse of heavenly glow

to be with her would fullfill my dream

I've always been enamored with things in space

the unknown thought has captured my soul

this story has been told another time another place

another orbiting body has captured me whole

 

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[cfix]

I thought this was quite enjoyable to read. Cute and very entertaining as well as different. Well written.

[Coyote Poetry]

Be careful what you wish for. I learn to have a conversation with any object. Something can be pretty and tear your face off. A very interesting poem. I like the things in space too. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rory CJ Frankson]

Lets hope this N.H.O. not swallow you whole, and your wife. Find out ;)

[?]

Wow! What a great discriptive poem. Love the rhyming. Hmmmm not totally sure of what to say.

Except, Far out man!!
lol