Hide and Seek

Hide me in your mind,
Let my face exist in front of your eyes,
Eyes are windows to the soul,
But what if I just wanted to rest?

Fall into touch of nothingness.

And I stay there,
Until you blink,
Than I stop hiding,
And I come out of your mind.

And start seeking to be seen.

Author's Note

I really need someone to criticise my work. Sorry for any grammar or spelling mistakes english is not my first language :)

Reviews

[lessa (kenzie)]

This is really good, enjoyed the emotional read

[Kim S.]

Than I stop hiding, (Than should be Then)
Other than that this is really well written