A Song of New Jersey

I'm in love with New Jersey. She's my home. She's my lover.

Speak to me dear Jersey.
It’s been a long day.
I may have failed and fumble,
And even fallen along as I may;
But your loving songs have been on my mind
all the way.
Your shores seem only greeting
and your forgotten bays seem so alone.
I hear a thousand voices
telling me to come home.

Reviews

[LC Coyle]

Lovely, I feel just the same way.

[Beka]

Such a sad feeling being so far away from home.
I use to feel that way about Michigan.
But Oklahoma is my home now.
I travel alot so I understand where you're coming from with this.
Brilliant.

[whispersoftly]

I live a hop and a skip away from NJ.....

I have grown to love it as well! Nice piece ;-)

[emz]

Lovely... How we love our homeland.... most gorgeous


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[An owl on the moon]

Outstanding personification! Your words bring her alive and give her movement and beauty...