Strange Places

 

You may live long,

            And be in good graces,

Study the world

            To discover your traces,

Or stay in one spot

            And greet new faces.

Just take a deep breath

            And tighten your laces.

Run as far as you can,

            But you’ll always end up in strange places.

Author's Note

I think its alittle too rhyming but you tell me.

Reviews

[Steffi]

As far as too much rhyming, i for once dont agree with you. I do believe that if you are going to go with heavy rhyming you should and more length to your piece. When you have a lot of rhyming in a small piece like this it seems to be unfinished.
Overall it is a very well written work. The message is something that everyone can understand and you portrayed it beautifully