The World is Spinning

The World is Spinning

A Poem by Bexfinch
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How I feel about relationships. Poor Trenton and Peyton ! : (

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I'm tired of the fake prince charmings eating at my heart.

 

Tearing away my protective covering making me vunerable and confused

 

Only to  add to your collection of hurt minds

 

Turning my color ful  sky gray and bleak.

 

My mouth expresses  my motionless words.

 

As your eyes freeze out the emotion sending shock aves througth my body

 

Making me think crazy thoughts

 

Listening to that one song that reminds me of you over andover again.

 

But why does my body make me do these crazy thins

 

Why does my heart flutter a beat paralyzing me.

 

In crazy emotion.

 

Daddy says its hormones

 

Mommy says its love

 

But I know that I'm on a ship goin too fast

 

And it won't slow down

 

I'm surrounded by pirhanas I just want to stop and scream

 

But for now I sit here thinking of you wondering when my world will crash 

© 2010 Bexfinch


Author's Note

Bexfinch
this is not concrete i dont think this is how i feel i gotta get it out before i do somthiin craz jk about the cr-z part

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yes thx i need alot ! oh gosh its hard to think howw much this needs . but itll come out good in the end


Posted 14 Years Ago


It's pretty good but you need to edit a bit.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 4, 2010
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Bexfinch
Bexfinch

Jacksonville, FL



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