Wedding vows.

Wedding vows.

A Poem by Mimi

_____, you are my one true love, the one I want to

 

 spend the rest of my life with. Today, I take you to be

 

 my husband. I promise you that I will be faithful,

 

worthy of your trust, and commendable of your love.

 

I vow to honor you, cherish you, love you, and

 

respect you, for rich or for poor,

 

or till death is at our door.

© 2010 Mimi


Author's Note

Mimi
Alright, so I wrote my friend's wedding vows for him and his soon-to-be-husband, and so he said he really liked them, and that I can keep them and write his own for him. I decided to post them. (I put ____ at the begining because I currently don't have a boyfriend :'[ )

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I like the ending line, and the way you began it with a blank space actually makes it all the more intriguing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


You should do other people's vows. It is really good and it shows that you have real depth and a real definition of what love is.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Dear Mimi,

This is indeed a very nice wedding vow. Sweet, sincere, and simple. Very well done.

Rick

Posted 14 Years Ago


You wrote a beautiful wedding vow.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


I'd like to tell you that this was a very nice piece.
And what else is there to say?
Very well done :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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